Audrey’s Magic Nine – #04 by Courtney Huddleston on November 20, 2017 at 5:01 am Chapter: Chapter Nine - Chasing Rainbows
How would they know who they are?
Audrey and the puppets are talking amongst themselves. But because they are invisible, it looks like they might be talking to the workers. Hmmm….
I figured it out pretty quickly, but this is why the Invisible Girl was drawn with dotted lines. 🙂
So as to not confuse, I’ll probably be incorporating that idea. Thanks!
Excavating giant bones with construction equipment? What the heck?
Good point. Yeah…I’ll probably have to make a few adjustments to the page later.
Good page nevertheless. But something feels off about Audrey. Everything looks right. But I feel like something is going to break…
I made some adjustments that will hopefully clear any confusion up. Sorry about that.
No, no, all is well. Was just making an observation.
Those comic changes work. Good job!
Thanks! That’s a relief.
Updated page looks much better. The bones were confusing (although funny), and I could see how some may get confused when there was no outline.
You’re right. The story is really gonna start picking up soon, and the last thing I want to do is confuse readers. Thank you for the feedback.